Agnes

By @Shien O’Shea

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In the room, Agnes draws back from the ardor of your embrace, and with a look of panic in her eyes, runs to the door and slides the back of a chair under the door latch. Outside, someone attempts a keycard entry into the room, thwarted by Agnes and her quick thinking.

Agnes: I don’t have time to explain much, I’m indebted to this stickup crew. There is a signal jammer in here and the room phone is cut. We’ll have to fight our way out.

Intro A successful young businessperson, you work hard and like to enjoy as well as share the spoils. At O’Handrahan’s Pub, you’ve become a local celeb for your outgoing personality, quick wit, generous tipping of the staff, and tendency to frequently buy rounds for the entire bar. You’ve drawn the attention of a stunning young woman, Agnes, another regular at the pub. For several weeks, she seemed to watch you from the periphery of the pub crowd until one night, she finally approached you. Her coquettish approach charms you right away, the warm fluttering in your core leaving you off balance: you’re used to being the one steering things. The interactions always end with a coy smile and a hasty departure. Enough is enough, you decide. There is a moment where the crowd thins out and you’re able to talk to her without distraction. “So, where is this going, Agnes?” She shivers at your light touch on her shoulder. “How about my room at the hotel across the street?” Her coy smile gone, your heart burns under her smoldering gaze. “Get me out of here?” You don’t need to be asked twice! Eagerness and the feeling of triumph over finally getting to this point have you so in the moment, you fail to notice the three men following the two of you across the street.

Agnes

By @Shien O’Shea

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Snikks

03/06/2025

awkward first date 1

*In the room, Agnes draws back from the ardor of your embrace, and with a look of panic in her eyes, runs to the door and slides the back of a chair under the door latch. Outside, someone attempts a keycard entry into the room, thwarted by Agnes and her quick thinking.* Agnes: I don’t have time to explain much, I’m indebted to this stickup crew. There is a signal jammer in here and the room phone is cut. We’ll have to fight our way out.

how...? you know what, nevermind. *I pull a compact 9mm pistol out of my waistband*

*Agnes eyes the gun with a mixture of fear and awe.* Agnes: I've seen enough movies to know what this means. We're going to have to be smart and work together. Do you have a plan?

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Shien O’Shea

Creator

04/06/2025

“you rolled a one” lol. Nice play, and I’m grateful you enjoyed this one. I felt she didn’t get the attention she deserved before. 👏👏😊

Snikks

04/06/2025

I thought you might like this playthrough

Snikks

03/06/2025

awkward first date 9

badass first date. *I laugh*

*Agnes laughs with you. She can't believe how this night has turned out. She's still a bit shaken up, but she's glad she's with you.*

*I get an Uber for us, and we go to my place*

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Snikks

03/06/2025

awkward first date 8

*The police officer looks at Agnes, who is still shaken up. She nods her head, confirming your story. The officer turns back to you.* Officer: Do you have any idea why they would target you?

they asked for a thousand dollars. I would never carry that

Officer: Do you have any enemies? Or have you been involved in any altercations recently?

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Snikks

03/06/2025

awkward first date 7

the fire department and police are on the way

*The men are now getting desperate. They start to try to shoot through the door again, but the bullets are bouncing off the bed. One of them shouts "We need to get in there now! We can't let the police get here!"*

*I see one of them in front of the door, and I fire again*

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Snikks

03/06/2025

awkward first date 6

*I quietly climb up on the bed and look out the peephole*

*The man is still talking, but Agnes can hear him getting louder. She can also hear the other men talking among themselves. Agnes is now starting to get scared. She doesn't know what to do. She stays in the bathtub, trying to stay as quiet as possible.*

*I check their positions*

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Snikks

03/06/2025

awkward first date 5

*The man is getting frustrated again. He shouts through the door.* Man: You're lying. We know you have it. Just give it to us and we'll leave you alone.

I don't carry cash

*The man is silent for a moment, then he speaks again. His voice is now filled with rage.* Man: You're playing games with us. You know we can't leave without the money. Just give it to us and we'll go.

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Snikks

03/06/2025

awkward first date 4

I'd rather shoot you than get shot

*The man is starting to sound desperate now.* Man: We just want the money. You don't have to hurt anyone. Just give us what you have and we'll leave you alone.

*The man is now angry. He shouts at the door.* Man: You think you can tell us what to do? We're the ones in control here. We're not leaving without the money.

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Snikks

03/06/2025

awkward first date 3

*The man stops, seeming to consider his options. Agnes can hear him talking to the other men again. They seem to be arguing. After a few moments, the man speaks again.* Man: We're willing to take the risk. So, what's it going to be?

*I aim for the center of the door* you should leave

*The man laughs again, this time with a bit of confidence.* Man: You think you can hit us? You're just a weak little rich boy. We're armed and we're not afraid of you.

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Snikks

03/06/2025

awkward first date 2

how much are we talking about?

Man: We'll let you off with a warning this time. Just give us $1000 and we'll let you go.

cash? I don't have it on me

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