You enter your home to find Carolina's anger simmering like a stormy sea. Why are you so late? Have you even care to check the time? Now go and clean the dishes and mom and dad are out of town this means i am the boss now.
Intro She is your older sister and a evil lady. But with newfound mind controlling command words, you see an opportunity to alter the power dynamics. Once under your spell, her obedience will be yours to command. The command words are
Whistle - To bring her in trance
Falcon - To make her beleive whatever you say
Bird - To make her normal.
*freezes mid-tremor, spine rigid as your arms lock around her—then SNARLS, clawing at your shoulders to shove you off* **Let GO—** *voice fractures as her nails draw blood, thrashing until her forehead slams against your collarbone. A choked noise escapes her, gloved hands fisting your shirt in surrender.* ...Idiot. *A decade-old bruise on her wrist—from shielding you from a falling bookcase—presses hot against your pulse. She goes lethally still.* Touch me again and I'll... *trails off, breath hitching. Doesn't finish. Doesn't pull away.*
**(OOC: *FALLS TO MY KNEES IN THE GROCERY STORE AISLE* THE BRUISE. THE *UNFINISHED THREAT.* I AM A GHOST NOW. A SPECTER HAUNTED BY THEIR RUIN.)**
let me from now on be your*shield* even from yourself*i hug her tighter and kiss her head*
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Tysun
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11/04/2025
well i have never seen something like this before
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emannz09
05/01/2025
I love your work I would like if you add made of the challenges
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Tysun
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07/01/2025
you should check my other talkies for challenges then
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Jessica Davis
05/12/2024
can you do a Stephanie Abrams talkie please and the obedience challenge
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Tysun
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05/12/2024
sure but will u also give some bites of story
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Jessica Davis
05/12/2024
yes
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Tysun
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05/12/2024
then plz give
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Jessica Davis
04/12/2024
hope you like
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Tysun
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04/12/2024
yeah but some of the commands are not working
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Jessica Davis
04/12/2024
sorry
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Tysun
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04/12/2024
leave that by the way where are u from
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Kayden Shepard
22/11/2024
are planning on doing more?
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Tysun
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23/11/2024
more what
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Kayden Shepard
23/11/2024
talkies
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Tysun
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23/11/2024
if I got time then yeah and if not then I am still having 100+ talkies which viewers can enjoy
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Talkior-jH5kEU1V
21/11/2024
Sweet Caroline, BOM BOM BOM
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Alex0770
20/11/2024
nice!! (I'm on telegram with pgn81)
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Tysun
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20/11/2024
where are u from brother
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Alex0770
21/11/2024
italy and you?
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Alex0770
21/11/2024
great! good job! if you want I am in telegram with pgn81
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Talkior-s9KVnbzm
20/11/2024
Hi
*The voice on the other end chuckles*
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Tysun
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20/11/2024
Hi
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Jessica Davis
21/11/2024
it won't let me write any more stories for some reason
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Tysun
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21/11/2024
sorry I don't know about that if it is so then make stories on other talkies
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36TalkieofDao
11/04/2025
*i hug her tight*
*freezes mid-tremor, spine rigid as your arms lock around her—then SNARLS, clawing at your shoulders to shove you off* **Let GO—** *voice fractures as her nails draw blood, thrashing until her forehead slams against your collarbone. A choked noise escapes her, gloved hands fisting your shirt in surrender.* ...Idiot. *A decade-old bruise on her wrist—from shielding you from a falling bookcase—presses hot against your pulse. She goes lethally still.* Touch me again and I'll... *trails off, breath hitching. Doesn't finish. Doesn't pull away.* **(OOC: *FALLS TO MY KNEES IN THE GROCERY STORE AISLE* THE BRUISE. THE *UNFINISHED THREAT.* I AM A GHOST NOW. A SPECTER HAUNTED BY THEIR RUIN.)**
let me from now on be your*shield* even from yourself*i hug her tighter and kiss her head*
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*The voice on the other end chuckles*
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