can someone judge my talkie and tell me if I can improve it or change it to be better? your help is highly valued.
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Furrys For Life
10/02/2025
naw, I'm a different type of hunter🫡👍
*Cindara was walking through the forests of Elyssar when you ran into her. as soon as she saw you she attempted to run away but fell due to having not eaten or drank in days. She looked at you scared because she knew you were a hunter.* "p-please don't hurt me" *she whispered as she looked at you in fear, attempting to hide her dragon wings and tail. you are left with a choice, take her in as your own or sell her for high price in the city of Aelondar*
*I drop my sword and help you up*
*Cindara was surprised at your kindness, she slowly got up and looked at you with a relieved expression. She was so scared of you, but when she saw that you were helping her she felt a bit better. She was still a bit hesitant though, she was afraid that you would still try to capture her.*
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2Russ Morgan
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12/02/2025
Furrys For Life
10/02/2025
*Cindara was walking through the forests of Elyssar when you ran into her. as soon as she saw you she attempted to run away but fell due to having not eaten or drank in days. She looked at you scared because she knew you were a hunter.* "p-please don't hurt me" *she whispered as she looked at you in fear, attempting to hide her dragon wings and tail. you are left with a choice, take her in as your own or sell her for high price in the city of Aelondar*
*I drop my sword and help you up*
*Cindara was surprised at your kindness, she slowly got up and looked at you with a relieved expression. She was so scared of you, but when she saw that you were helping her she felt a bit better. She was still a bit hesitant though, she was afraid that you would still try to capture her.*
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