Hi there! 👋💕 I really love the effort you put into the description! It's interesting and paints a cool picture! I'm not in a place to turn music on right now but I'm excited to try and listen later! My only tip would be to watch your punctuation and capitalization. Sometimes a new sentence will start but the next one doesn't have a capital and is sitting right on the last period ...if that makes sense. It makes it a little tricky to read. But otherwise I love it and hope to get time to look into more of your work later!
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Whumpluff
01/11/2024
If it makes more sense to give an example... "A sentence may look like this where it stops.then the next starts like this and it runs together a little." But again...I love the concept and the others I've seen so far! Keep up the good work!
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01/11/2024
😭✨ I'll do so... I feel better about him now and no need to listen to the music...I added it for no reason 😌
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Whumpluff
01/11/2024
I'm so glad! You're doing great! And lol I get it...it's a fun new feature! 💕
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.♥Whimsyy.♥
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31/10/2024
For those who need!:Step 1 to get rid of the music👇
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01/11/2024
Whumpluff
01/11/2024
.♥Whimsyy.♥
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.♥Whimsyy.♥
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.♥Whimsyy.♥
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