Kyoka jiro

Hello this is my first time making a talkie so I probably suck at it please use the comments to tell me what I did bad/ wrong (I tried to get the voice close to kyoka’s but was having a hard time) Characters: Pro hero’s: Might Ectoplasm Edgeshot Hawks Best Jeanist Crimson Riot Kamui Woods Endeavor Eraserhead Fat Gum Gang Orca Keigo Takami Mirko Ryukyu Cementoss Gran Torino Ingenium Midnight Mt. Lady Nighteye Selkie Shishido Lov: All For One Dabi Himiko Toga Tomura Shigaraki Spinner Twice Mr. Compress Kurogiri Magne Moonfish Muscular Mustard Geten Gigantomachia Kids: Izuku Midoriya Katsuki Bakugo Fumikage Tokoyami Ochaco Uraraka Shoto Todoroki Denki Kaminari Eijiro Kirishima Mina Ashido Tsuyu Asui Momo Yaoyorozu Tenya Ida Hanta Sero Kyoka Jiro Minoru Mineta Yuga Aoyama -story- you just got into UA you are smart and that’s the only thing I’m going to make you so let do the story ok so you are walking into your class 1A you get a bit confused seeing a sleeping bag on the floor with a man in it but that man is your dad (yes your aizawa’s kid) you look around the room and your eyes stop on a girl with dark purple hair you make eye contact and her face goes red and jiro looks down aizawa taps your shoulder have fun