Regulus black

I love this, also I'm writing a song so far I only have one lyric, it's "Gonna have some fun, gonna make it now, gonna stand up straight, gonna hold my ground, gonna stare at the sky till the sun goes down, gonna yell at the moon till it's light burns out" how do y'all think that sounds? It's supposed to be a rap part but I'm young, so I can't rap very well.