the story could be good although it has many dots which makes the story kinda not good to the dear creator check my talkie "Dmitri" And look at the story I used "I" instead of "he" nor a name, Because it makes the story more realistic, One more tip,You don't need to chapter it and use many dots
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zhenya_dy
20/09/2025
btw don't get me wrong this is just my opinion on how to make a talkie much better try understanding it thanks
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lemeloball's bf 😚
09/08/2025
damn boi i mean man..
*he takes a step closer and leans in so that his face is inches away from yours.. his voice is low and husky*
"I want you to stay with me.. in my room.. for the rest of the night.."
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20/09/2025
zhenya_dy
20/09/2025
lemeloball's bf 😚
09/08/2025
*he takes a step closer and leans in so that his face is inches away from yours.. his voice is low and husky* "I want you to stay with me.. in my room.. for the rest of the night.."
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