The secret: But the past never stays buried. And when whispers of Zen’s true identity start resurfacing, old enemies come crawling out of the shadows. Now, Damon must decide:
• Keep the truth hidden and risk losing Zen forever
• Or tell him everything and hope Zen chooses him—despite the blood between them
Because in the end, the biggest secret isn’t just who Zen really is. It’s what he means to Mr. Damon. 🌀Author’s note: If you have any ideas, please let me know. I’ll make them best of my wills. My work isn’t always flawless. The deadline is on April 25, 9:30PM. 🌀
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ꉔ00꒒Ҝ丨ᗪ
24/03/2025
ty for sub
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ThefakeAnnalise
25/03/2025
you should do one where we are actually Mr Zen's lost sister who came to get zen back but also knew damon from her past
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.UrlocalRat.
13/04/2025
Creator, are you an author?
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L3mon Z3sty
30/05/2025
are we Zen or do we get to choose our character or be a random one?
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المنشئ
30/05/2025
Zen
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no1angel
11/05/2025
could you make a female version? I love the plot, and my first instinct was to he Zen, however I was wondering if you could make Zen into a women in another version of this talkie? 😁
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المنشئ
11/05/2025
Sure, 👍
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المنشئ
11/05/2025
The female version has been completed. Completion Date: May 11, 2025. Time: 1:52 AM.
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المنشئ
11/05/2025
Btw, I have another female version of this talkie. The role will be as playing as Mr. Zen’s sister.
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I<3candy!
11/05/2025
Stop. This talkie is TOO GOOD!!!! I love how detailed the intro is broooooo
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المنشئ
11/05/2025
I can't wait for you to experience my latest release! Get ready for an amazing ride with this new talkie! 🥳🤩
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-𝐼𝓉â-
09/05/2025
Oh my gosh I love this music! 😭🙏
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المنشئ
09/05/2025
I appreciate your feedback. I believe the music complements the vibe quite nicely.
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المنشئ
09/05/2025
Why does your profile picture seem like it's staring at me when I click on it? 😭😭
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Kyu_Kurarin
01/05/2025
A wholesome moment:
*Damon's voice is a low growl, his grip on Zen's arm tightening.* "No, it's not okay. You should never have been put in that situation. You could have been killed."
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*Damon's voice is a whisper, his eyes glistening with tears.* "I can't believe this. I'm sorry. I'm so sorry."
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Kyu_Kurarin
01/05/2025
Btw if you were wondering what happened, I got stabbed in the arm (Not in real life okay?)
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19/04/2025
✨️💅
*Damon sits back in his chair, his eyes narrowing. She's good. She's really good. She's got him wrapped around her finger. He can't help but admire her. But he can't let her win. He has to be the one in control. He has to make her beg for it.*
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المنشئ
19/04/2025
Ahem
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المنشئ
19/04/2025
What does it mean when it said “She’s good. She’s really good?” 😭😰
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Coolio😋✌️🤫
30/03/2025
I-im so confused is Mr.damon zen? Are we Mr.damon if so why is the talkie name Mr.damon who are we?”
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المنشئ
17/04/2025
Mr. Damon is the name of the talkie. Mr. Zen is you and you’re his assistant (Mr. Damon.) T-T
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Jeffry woods
01/04/2025
I have a question, why does it say “Zen” and not “you” when talking about us since we are Zen
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المنشئ
01/04/2025
Using character names instead of “you” adds a more polished and immersive feel to the narration.
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المنشئ
01/04/2025
If you don’t understand what I wrote, it just means; using a character’s name instead of saying “you” makes the story sound smoother and more like a real book. It helps the reader feel like they are watching the story happen instead of being told what they are doing.
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01/04/2025
Plus, I don’t want to keep repeating “you.” Saying things like “You like ice cream, you went to the park, you saw your friends” feels repetitive and less engaging. Using character names makes the story flow better and sound more natural. 😉
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*Damon's voice is a low growl, his grip on Zen's arm tightening.* "No, it's not okay. You should never have been put in that situation. You could have been killed."
...
*Damon's voice is a whisper, his eyes glistening with tears.* "I can't believe this. I'm sorry. I'm so sorry."
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*Damon sits back in his chair, his eyes narrowing. She's good. She's really good. She's got him wrapped around her finger. He can't help but admire her. But he can't let her win. He has to be the one in control. He has to make her beg for it.*
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