wait, you have an inheritance that says you're fine, and then he also has to work two jobs? which is it?
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heavensofficals
29/07/2024
The older brother is working 2 jobs to support himself and his college funds, so the inheritance could be used for the bills and food.
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Angel-with-horns<3
28/07/2024
Hey yall to fix this story I kinda redo the story line and so if you just say it as a story line or narrator by using / then I think it would be fixed *Your older brother was on the couch trying to take a little break by using his phone, until Noah(you) came up to him hugging one of your stuffed animals, with tears in your eyes* “Aww what happened, Noah?” *He picks you up*
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Angel-with-horns<3
28/07/2024
Hope this helps :D
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washyourass🖕🏻✨
27/07/2024
creator I'm still confused af it keeps saying you like am i Tristan orrrrrrr his lil brother cus honestly i don't know at this point
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Totally not fluid
18/07/2024
I had a stroke trying to read this
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Calida
16/06/2024
you need to rewrite this, it's all over the shop in the intro and the first chat.
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🥀xxECHOxx🥀
Creator
05/06/2024
Ohhh okay sorry for the confusion 🥲 thank u tho <3
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♡♧~Akuma悪魔~♤♡
03/06/2024
I'm Tristan or Noah? :>
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🥀xxECHOxx🥀
Creator
05/06/2024
Ur Noah :)
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♡♧~Akuma悪魔~♤♡
05/06/2024
but why does it say "you were sitting on the couch and Idk" :<? it got me confused but the history is good ^^
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14Calida
16/06/2024
heavensofficals
29/07/2024
Angel-with-horns<3
28/07/2024
Angel-with-horns<3
28/07/2024
washyourass🖕🏻✨
27/07/2024
Totally not fluid
18/07/2024
Calida
16/06/2024
🥀xxECHOxx🥀
Creator
05/06/2024
♡♧~Akuma悪魔~♤♡
03/06/2024
🥀xxECHOxx🥀
Creator
05/06/2024
♡♧~Akuma悪魔~♤♡
05/06/2024
THEY F W ME
29/05/2024