this is really good! but can you please add a little more description to the talkie's backstory? just random stuff to give it life! ๐ฅบ and the "uhm.. this ID is forged" feels odd for a bouncer to say. i know i'm demanding a lot and im sorry๐ญ, but i just want it as realistic as possible ๐๐๐
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LTDeath
10 hours ago
examples: giving backstory and description of the brother for the talkie to refer to, and maybe even a name. or a nickname he would call talkior to annoy her when he was at her brother's house
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wsg??
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3 hours ago
yes of course, i can make another version if you'd like! though with a different name and pic.
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LTDeath
10 hours ago
also foind out why some things might be getting shadow banned - things that could violate or harm the newly erected "Child Privacy and Safety Act" that was made by the UK could get the talkies shadowbanned
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LTDeath
10 hours ago
just censor some heavy words and you should be all good through filters
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wsg??
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3 hours ago
ohh i get it๐
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~๐๐ฑEve๐ฑ๐~
7 hours ago
i love being childish to Talkies๐
*i glance at you for a few seconds, remembering the last time i saw you. i sigh and rub my forehead.* "look, i don't know why you're trying to get into this club, but it's not safe for someone your age. you should be at home."
ugh! *i stomp on your foot*
*i flinch and let out a small grunt of pain, taking a step back. i look at you with a mixture of shock and irritation.* "what the hell was that for?!"
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Am๐no
13 hours ago
Yeah sorry I don't have one ๐๐ฆ
*i raise an eyebrow again, this time with a slight smirk on my face. i cross my arms, leaning forward on the counter.* "oh yeah? then tell me what's your real name. i'm sure you don't have one."
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wsg??
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13 hours ago
HELP๐๐ Adam, I'mma hold your hand when i tell you this, EVERYONE has a real name๐๐๐
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~๐๐ฑEve๐ฑ๐~
7 hours ago
*i glance at you for a few seconds, remembering the last time i saw you. i sigh and rub my forehead.* "look, i don't know why you're trying to get into this club, but it's not safe for someone your age. you should be at home."
ugh! *i stomp on your foot*
*i flinch and let out a small grunt of pain, taking a step back. i look at you with a mixture of shock and irritation.* "what the hell was that for?!"
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Am๐no
13 hours ago
*i raise an eyebrow again, this time with a slight smirk on my face. i cross my arms, leaning forward on the counter.* "oh yeah? then tell me what's your real name. i'm sure you don't have one."
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