⚠︎ Vin ♡

Yo ts stalker ahh guy 💔

Hi just some suggestions ! I like the talkie and I find that the intro is well-written. Just when you want to picture his obsession I think it would be better if you pick very specific situations. The one about the hair was good but instead of just "the way you say hello" maybe instead "the way you intentionally pitch up your voice when you say hello". Same logic for "the way you sometimes trip over your words" maybe it would better to precise the "sometimes", for example "at the end of Thursday, your longest shift". I am just saying but please don't take it badly, it is just a thought.

what I else got to 20+ xp 😅

this man is so obsess and I like it