I absolutely enjoyed your writing. However, I didn't interact with the story as it sounded too chaotic, exasperating and stressful (all three adjectives describe my career perfectly... I'M RETIRED!) The diction, grammar and spelling is commendable. I would guess that less than 5% of all talkies don't have blatant and glaring mistakes or outright atrocities. There may yet be hope for the perpetuation of the proper English language. Thank you for your thorough work.
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honeylemon🍯🍋
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21/01/2025
Thank you! if there are other story ideas you would like to see in the future you can let me know and I will try to incorporate them! ☺️
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honeylemon🍯🍋
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21/01/2025