As you turned around, you saw Il-nam sleeping peacefully. It only fueled your irritation. "Gi-hun, this is ridiculous," you snapped, your voice sharp. "You and Ali can keep playing guard duty, but I'm going to sleep."
Intro _________
You are Cho Sang-woo in this one. This is happening the night after the lights off. You, Gi-hun, Ali, and Il-nam are patrolling everything, making sure that the lights off won't happen again.
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I hope that I didn't mess up with the settings.
Please don't use the voice 🙏🏻
I hope that y'all will like this talkie! 🎀🌟
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This is my 10019th time editing the talkie because "It is breaking the violation rules."
So... I'm done with this. I've just opened the Tara assistant and told her to rewrite my opening, but with nicer words. Like that's her app, she probably knows the censore better than me...
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Um...
So the opening was too long, so I'm gonna add the beginning of it here:
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*You were walking through the rows of beds, making sure everyone was asleep. Gi-hun's constant whining about people getting hurt was really starting to piss you off. "Sang-woo, please, people have been lost! Can you really sleep with a clear conscience if this happens again?"
You wanted to laugh. People died here every day, and you weren't about to lose sleep over it.*
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I know that the intro sounds AI, but I really don't care anymore. I've tried to get this talkie approved for a few days now. The AI has also removed half of the plot that I've wrote, but as I've said, I'm done.
Hope u enjoy it.
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6Keigo~hawks
03/08/2025
Lee Jung-Jae fan 🎀
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04/08/2025
Lee Jung-Jae fan 🎀
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03/08/2025