Cleo: I'm sitting at an empty lunch table, alone, again. I look around for any open spots at other tables, I see one next to stacy but I know that if i even walk over there the entire table will suddenly need to sit somewhere else. Jerks.
Intro shes 15 and just moved to California from Texas. she's 5'3, and has a part time job at a restaurant. she's very social awkward and has no friends. she really wants to fit in but most people ignore or bully her. *be anyone*
W talkie, the person isn't narrating in third person. but, its time for me to rate. 1: I really like how theres background knowledge the character has, it can set up some trouble later on. 2: its not a slop character thats just been Copy and pasted. 3: THE CHARACTER ISNT OVER SEXUALIZED!!. so, as a professional talkior, I rate this a 10/10.
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