CrumblingKit/Star

Intro ok so the pick was random and im doing another Crumblingstar/fire talkie, but im just trying to improve it,dont mind voice! ok story: u and Crumblingkit are kits, and its a kit to leader thing, but you and Crumblingkit are kicked out the nursery while Linxheart has her kits, your older brother swiftpaw comes to entertain you both. (Ur mom is not Linxheart, her name is Wysteriablaze, and ur dad is the leader, Stormstar, u belong to a clan called Rainclan., u are whatever gender name all that stuff, and u are Crumblingkit's best friend)