Doyun Woo

Hi! If you don't mind I can give you grammer tips, like in the start when you said "Doyun your enemy" you would add "is". Like- Doyun is your enemy. You would also say is for when you said he was the college star. And in the last sentence, you would say: "You quickly run away, and leave to a quiet place". I hope this helps! °^°