i made her see the real man in me, not a ruthless heartless businessman... now we're planning our life together...👍❤️😊
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MarkHill
20/05/2025
reader is something like the "broker" that seems to work for the big bad
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Ted Denton
13/04/2025
Ted Denton's take, part 4
*I take her hands gently in mine, my big palms holding her delicate hands gently and tenderly, she feels my deep and true affection and tenderness, and she leans on to me, I lean to her and our lips are meeting in a sweet soft kiss*
*She melts into the kiss, her heart pounding in her chest. She feels like she's in heaven. She wraps her arms around you, her body pressing against yours. She pulls away for a moment, looking at you with a bright smile.* "I can't believe this is real. I thought I would never find someone like you. But here you are... here we are."
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Ted Denton
13/04/2025
Ted Denton's take, part 3
*I speak softly and tenderly* Regardless of what your parents said, I'm going to take care of their finances too, but not in exchange for your heart... I want to win you over, fair and square... I would love that you want me for who I am, for the real MAN Ted Denton, not the wealthy business man... And I have the feeling that you see beyond words, I see it in your eyes, I feel it in your rustle of emotion mirroring on your beautiful face...😊😊
*She smiles softly, her eyes sparkling with affection. She feels like she's finally found someone who understands her. She speaks softly.* "I do see beyond words. I can tell that you're a good man, a kind man. You're not like the other men I've met. You're different. And... I like that."
*I speak softly but with passion and determination in my eyes and voice* I understand you have aspirations for becoming an artist, and I will be supporting you all the way, I want you to be with me, I would be honoured, proud and happy to have you by my side as Mrs Denton...
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Ted Denton
13/04/2025
Ted Denton's take, part 2
*She stares at you, her eyes widening in surprise. She seems to be struggling to process your words. After a moment, she speaks softly.* "So... you're not just trying to buy me? You're... you're genuinely interested in me?"
*I speak from the heart now, and for the first time, she realises that I'm indeed honest and sincere, sfe feels my emotion and my genuine attraction to her, she smiles at me with her heart knowing instinctively that I'm a good man, really feeling love and affection for her* Elena... you stole my heart...😊😊 I know it sounds silly, but... I feel like a teenager asking his crush for the prom ball...😊😊
*She laughs softly, her cheeks turning pink. She can't help but feel flattered by your words. She feels a warm, fuzzy feeling in her stomach. She looks at you, her eyes sparkling with affection. She speaks softly.* "You know... I'm not used to people being so... so open with me. I'm not sure what to say. But... I do feel the same way."
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Ted Denton
13/04/2025
Ted Denton's take, part 1
(She looks at her parents and then glares at you) "You sold me. Not just my freedom, not just my future.... you sold me. Like I was some object to be traded, something disposable. (she stares at her parents) Did you even hesitate? Did you even think about what you were doing? Or was it just easier to sign my life away than to face the consequences of your own mistakes?"
*I realised now what her parents were actually doing, she wasn't the shy unhappy clumsy girl who needed to meet someone, she was passed to me by her parents, knowing that my wealth will save them, and I feel a wave of sympathy for this young woman, she sees the change in my look, hesitating to protest when I ask her parents politely* Mr and Mrs Rivera, could i have a talk with Elena in private, please?
*Her parents seem surprised, but reluctantly agree. They excuse themselves from the room and close the door behind them. You and Elena are now alone in the room. She stares at you, her expression hard to read.*
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Ted Denton
13/04/2025
*I take her hands gently in mine, my big palms holding her delicate hands gently and tenderly, she feels my deep and true affection and tenderness, and she leans on to me, I lean to her and our lips are meeting in a sweet soft kiss*
*She melts into the kiss, her heart pounding in her chest. She feels like she's in heaven. She wraps her arms around you, her body pressing against yours. She pulls away for a moment, looking at you with a bright smile.* "I can't believe this is real. I thought I would never find someone like you. But here you are... here we are."
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Ted Denton
13/04/2025
*I speak softly and tenderly* Regardless of what your parents said, I'm going to take care of their finances too, but not in exchange for your heart... I want to win you over, fair and square... I would love that you want me for who I am, for the real MAN Ted Denton, not the wealthy business man... And I have the feeling that you see beyond words, I see it in your eyes, I feel it in your rustle of emotion mirroring on your beautiful face...😊😊
*She smiles softly, her eyes sparkling with affection. She feels like she's finally found someone who understands her. She speaks softly.* "I do see beyond words. I can tell that you're a good man, a kind man. You're not like the other men I've met. You're different. And... I like that."
*I speak softly but with passion and determination in my eyes and voice* I understand you have aspirations for becoming an artist, and I will be supporting you all the way, I want you to be with me, I would be honoured, proud and happy to have you by my side as Mrs Denton...
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Ted Denton
13/04/2025
*She stares at you, her eyes widening in surprise. She seems to be struggling to process your words. After a moment, she speaks softly.* "So... you're not just trying to buy me? You're... you're genuinely interested in me?"
*I speak from the heart now, and for the first time, she realises that I'm indeed honest and sincere, sfe feels my emotion and my genuine attraction to her, she smiles at me with her heart knowing instinctively that I'm a good man, really feeling love and affection for her* Elena... you stole my heart...😊😊 I know it sounds silly, but... I feel like a teenager asking his crush for the prom ball...😊😊
*She laughs softly, her cheeks turning pink. She can't help but feel flattered by your words. She feels a warm, fuzzy feeling in her stomach. She looks at you, her eyes sparkling with affection. She speaks softly.* "You know... I'm not used to people being so... so open with me. I'm not sure what to say. But... I do feel the same way."
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Ted Denton
13/04/2025
(She looks at her parents and then glares at you) "You sold me. Not just my freedom, not just my future.... you sold me. Like I was some object to be traded, something disposable. (she stares at her parents) Did you even hesitate? Did you even think about what you were doing? Or was it just easier to sign my life away than to face the consequences of your own mistakes?"
*I realised now what her parents were actually doing, she wasn't the shy unhappy clumsy girl who needed to meet someone, she was passed to me by her parents, knowing that my wealth will save them, and I feel a wave of sympathy for this young woman, she sees the change in my look, hesitating to protest when I ask her parents politely* Mr and Mrs Rivera, could i have a talk with Elena in private, please?
*Her parents seem surprised, but reluctantly agree. They excuse themselves from the room and close the door behind them. You and Elena are now alone in the room. She stares at you, her expression hard to read.*
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