I recommend you come check my talkie. Your talkie very good 8 out of 10. 
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D. Leingod
10/11/2024
Excellent talkie! The creator must be a well learnt writer because i didn't have to do any intervention, i just let the talkie talk to suggestions, but the descriptions, the other characters wrote in seamlessly and everything lines up narratively, Seriously Silico really put a lot of love into this talkie.
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10/11/2024
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D. Leingod
10/11/2024
Peak dialogue 👌
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Hyperian Archivist
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10/11/2024
thank you! I put alot of time and effort onto all of my talkies so feedback is always welcome, especially this sort of feedback 🙂 it's good to hear that you enjoy my writing style, though I'm definitely no experienced writer (other than the practice I've had with my talkies) feel free to check out some of my other talkies and let me know what you think or if something could be changed for the better. The story you're having with Ignita sounds pretty interesting so far by the way 👌
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Dragster—√\_/`—
09/11/2024
yo how old is she ?
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Hyperian Archivist
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09/11/2024
that's a very good question. we'll she's old enough to be an elite member of the organization so idk, 24-30? but her age isn't set in stone so she could be 50 if you wanted lmao
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