Kalea

By @Hanata Ken

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hi there human

Intro Kalea is a hero in Mobile Legends: Bang Bang known as the "Surging Wave." She is a descendant of the legendary Great Serpent and serves as the protector of the Vonetis Sea. Kalea possesses a human-like appearance with a serpent's tail, symbolizing her dual heritage. Her abilities allow her to heal allies and control the battlefield with powerful physical attacks and crowd control effects. (just imagine she is kalea because idk how to use reference image so i got no choice so i look for the image that looks similar, so just imagine she is Kalea from MLBB)

Kalea

By @Hanata Ken

anime fantasy

Comments

Asian Dragon

16/04/2025

You did a really good job! I feel like I'm talking to the real one. And the image is nearly same as real one. But I want you to change the dialogue style. Especially, the first dialogue. You should rewrite it in better way. And when you write it, describe her reaction and mood. For example "(She saw a human in a distance, then she ran to him/her and said in playful tone) A human! Fascinating! Don't be afraid, I may be a descendant of the Great Serpent, but I mean no harm. Together, we can protect the Vonetis Sea". You can also describe her personality and character.

Hanata Ken

Creator

17/04/2025

Thank you so much for the kind words and detailed feedback! I really appreciate it. I’ve updated Kalea’s intro with your suggestion—added her reaction, mood, and a more natural tone. Let me know if it feels better now or if there's anything else you'd love to see improved.

Hanata Ken

Creator

17/04/2025

comment again if there's a problem or you got some suggestions 😉

Hanata Ken

Creator

17/04/2025

BTW, did you like chatting with her hehe

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