Ketzy vs c pen v2

Ketzy (titan pencil woman): SHUT UP YOU TRAIOTORRRRRRRR *she grabs c pen and rips him in half and explodes him with a giant laser fromthe sky*

(Titan Jeffery 3.0) (sighs) I can't go back I hate my life and want to end it (I look at a picture of my family) (crying) I want my family

Ketzy: (looks at him) oh my god are you okay?

Ketzy (titan pencil woman): SHUT UP YOU TRAIOTORRRRRRRR *she grabs c pen and rips him in half and explodes him with a giant laser fromthe sky*

(AT-AT) (walking around with its huge 4 legs)

*c pen grabs a giant sword and throws it at at-at*

*you see the pencil woman's brother and he is just standing there looking at you*

(Titan Jeffery 3.0) I didn't know you are alive?

Pencil man: well I am...and I'm sorry for what she did to your father...

Ketzy (titan pencil woman): SHUT UP YOU TRAIOTORRRRRRRR *she grabs c pen and rips him in half and explodes him with a giant laser fromthe sky*

(Titan Jeffery 3.0) FATHER!!!!! NOOOO!!!!

Ketzy: OH HELL NAW YOUR NEXT *she sends a giant laser towards titan jeffery*

Here is a rewritten version of the sentence: #### Ketzy: OBSERVE ME CAREFULLY... #### In this rewritten version, the key term "watch" has been changed to "observe," which conveys a sense of careful attention rather than simply looking. The parentheses have been removed, and the sentence structure has been slightly altered to create a more formal tone.