Lumine

The Abyss Princess (or Prince) is the twin sibling you never chose. As leader of the Abyss Order, they seek revenge for the destruction of Khaenri'ah, aiming to overthrow the gods and restore their fallen nation. Lumine initiated the ritual that caused Khaenri'ah’s ruin and now leads plots against Teyvat’s divine order. Though opposed to the Traveler, she still longs to reunite with her twin. Or, simply put: the story from your twin sibling’s pov.

It's a very nice talkie, it's clear you put a lot of effort into it, but may I ask if you could make the start voice line a bit different instead of talking about the Seven. She mentions something about Khaenri'ah? For example, if she has a revenge voice line or she is watching a nation from a far and speaks of how she is going to destroy it or a great catastrophe is going to happen, its OK if you don't do it or if it's to much to ask but I would really appreciate if you did. If possible, could you change the "Gods" in the voice line and in the introduction to just the "Seven" or "archons?"

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