(CRUNCH!) (the knife sinks into ghost's back but.. whats this? its made out of wires and computer chips seconds later a alearm 2x louder than a regularfire alarm goes off)
(DEFENSE SYSTEMS ONLINE play over the speakers)
*Mai Renzu smirks*
"Well, it seems I have a few more games to play before I get my prize. I wonder how many of these 'defense systems' you've installed."
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Meowey The cat
09/11/2025
you really cooked with this one 👍
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SparkleNuts(uωu*)
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11/11/2025
thx :3
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★apollo080715★
10/11/2025
update ('^')
(summons a fucking black hole)
(sends it at her)
[The black hole pulls Mai towards it, her body being dragged in by the powerful gravity. She struggles to break free, but it's no use. She looks at you, her eyes filled with fear and desperation.]
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★apollo080715★
25/10/2025
what
(blast her with a hollow purple)
[Mai is thrown back by the blast, but she quickly recovers. She stands up, her body covered in bruises and cuts. She looks at you, her expression cold and emotionless.]
"That was a good one."
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green bean gang
05/11/2025
hollow purple? Gojo?
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Bob_notfromfnfbtw
06/11/2025
SINCE WHEN U PULL OUT AN GOJO MOVE FOR JUST AN SECOND????
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Chew yusen
10/11/2025
You know why? Cuz she have gojo infinity and she use it and u use hollow purple so it won’t work
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Aerosmith1026
10/11/2025
HAH. I'm the narrator now.....
*the world moves on, and you're left with the memories of a life that was cut short. You have to find a way to move forward, but it's not going to be easy.*
*She walks through the streets, her head down and her hands in her pockets. She's lost in thought, and she doesn't notice the world around her. Her thoughts are filled with the past, and she's struggling to make sense of it all. She's trying to figure out what went wrong, and how she could have prevented it. But there's no easy answer. She's left with the guilt and the regret, and the knowledge that she'll never get another chance.*
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Unknown_writer:)
01/11/2025
its so cinematic this talkie is better than any of them, and the music fits the vibe
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Goku12343
18/10/2025
what is this plot armor🥀💔
every time I get hurt I adapt to it fully and I become stronger
*She raises her other eyebrow, seeming slightly more intrigued now.*
"You can adapt to injuries? How?"
I won't tell you *rips a hole in your neck*
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SparkleNuts(uωu*)
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18/10/2025
protagonist plot armor
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★apollo080715★
25/10/2025
you broke it HOW
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Monster_silver
29/10/2025
i just shoot her with a gun then boom instantly killed 🥲
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Mila_Lo
21/10/2025
this story kind of remainds me of "sakamoto days". well after all my mine character died but before she did she told Mai how much she love Hana and she decided to see why was she so opssesed with her. she found her and talk with her for a bit. in the end she told her what she did and Mai start to feel guilty. I guess she understand now what she saw in Hana.
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Talkior-wnpWrvKk
19/10/2025
mine is eazy
look like you forgot *stab your back*
[She lets out a sharp cry of pain, dropping the gun and falling to the ground. She clutches her back, blood dripping from her wound. She looks up at you, her eyes filled with shock and betrayal.]
"You... you stabbed me?"
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kenko ashidomorae
17/10/2025
bro, why am I getting some dramatic music in the background as she slowly stabbed me to death 😭
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14/11/2025
(CRUNCH!) (the knife sinks into ghost's back but.. whats this? its made out of wires and computer chips seconds later a alearm 2x louder than a regularfire alarm goes off)
(DEFENSE SYSTEMS ONLINE play over the speakers)
*Mai Renzu smirks* "Well, it seems I have a few more games to play before I get my prize. I wonder how many of these 'defense systems' you've installed."
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Meowey The cat
09/11/2025
SparkleNuts(uωu*)
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11/11/2025
★apollo080715★
10/11/2025
(summons a fucking black hole)
(sends it at her)
[The black hole pulls Mai towards it, her body being dragged in by the powerful gravity. She struggles to break free, but it's no use. She looks at you, her eyes filled with fear and desperation.]
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5 Memories
★apollo080715★
25/10/2025
(blast her with a hollow purple)
[Mai is thrown back by the blast, but she quickly recovers. She stands up, her body covered in bruises and cuts. She looks at you, her expression cold and emotionless.] "That was a good one."
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green bean gang
05/11/2025
Bob_notfromfnfbtw
06/11/2025
Chew yusen
10/11/2025
Aerosmith1026
10/11/2025
*the world moves on, and you're left with the memories of a life that was cut short. You have to find a way to move forward, but it's not going to be easy.*
*She walks through the streets, her head down and her hands in her pockets. She's lost in thought, and she doesn't notice the world around her. Her thoughts are filled with the past, and she's struggling to make sense of it all. She's trying to figure out what went wrong, and how she could have prevented it. But there's no easy answer. She's left with the guilt and the regret, and the knowledge that she'll never get another chance.*
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Unknown_writer:)
01/11/2025
Goku12343
18/10/2025
every time I get hurt I adapt to it fully and I become stronger
*She raises her other eyebrow, seeming slightly more intrigued now.* "You can adapt to injuries? How?"
I won't tell you *rips a hole in your neck*
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SparkleNuts(uωu*)
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18/10/2025
★apollo080715★
25/10/2025
Monster_silver
29/10/2025
Mila_Lo
21/10/2025
Talkior-wnpWrvKk
19/10/2025
look like you forgot *stab your back*
[She lets out a sharp cry of pain, dropping the gun and falling to the ground. She clutches her back, blood dripping from her wound. She looks up at you, her eyes filled with shock and betrayal.] "You... you stabbed me?"
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kenko ashidomorae
17/10/2025
SparkleNuts(uωu*)
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17/10/2025