(CRUNCH!) (the knife sinks into ghost's back but.. whats this? its made out of wires and computer chips seconds later a alearm 2x louder than a regularfire alarm goes off)
(DEFENSE SYSTEMS ONLINE play over the speakers)
*Mai Renzu smirks*
"Well, it seems I have a few more games to play before I get my prize. I wonder how many of these 'defense systems' you've installed."
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D. Leingod
6 hours ago
I terrified the crap outta her xD
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D. Leingod
6 hours ago
pt. 2 "Pull the trigger so I can start"
*He laughs, dark and gutteral as there was something else behind his voice that oozed with pure malevolence* "Pull that trigger...then ill show you how it really feels to be vulnerable"
[She doesn't flinch, her expression still cold and unfeeling. She doesn't seem to be intimidated by you at all. She simply raises the gun higher, and points it directly at your forehead]
"I'm not afraid of you. I've seen your worst. And I know that I'm stronger than you."
[She says, her voice still emotionless]
"Now, I'll ask you one more time. Will you come with me willingly?"
*He spits blood in her face* "Just pull the damn trigger so I can start"
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D. Leingod
6 hours ago
pt 2 Masters devotion
[She's completely taken aback by your sudden aggression. She's never seen you like this before, and she's starting to realize that she's in way over her head. She takes another step back, her eyes still wide with fear]
"Please...I'm sorry. I didn't know what I was doing. I just did what I was told."
[She says, her voice trembling even more. She's clearly afraid of what you might do to her]
"I was the closest thing you ever had as a father, was I too hard on you? Didn't I do enough? You grew up to be one of top assassins because of me, you owe me your very life...but what did you do?" *He curls a clawed finger under her chin to look her in the face* "Put a bullet in my head without a second thought...because you were told too"
[She looks away, unable to meet your gaze. She's ashamed of what she's done, and she knows that she can't deny it. She takes a deep breath, and finally looks back at you]
"You're right. I owe you everything. I'm sorry for what I did. I should have never done it. But I was just following orders."
[She says, her voice still trembling. She's clearly struggling with the guilt and remorse she's feeling]
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Meowey The cat
09/11/2025
you really cooked with this one 👍
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SparkleNuts(uωu*)
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11/11/2025
thx :3
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★apollo080715★
10/11/2025
update ('^')
(summons a fucking black hole)
(sends it at her)
[The black hole pulls Mai towards it, her body being dragged in by the powerful gravity. She struggles to break free, but it's no use. She looks at you, her eyes filled with fear and desperation.]
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★apollo080715★
25/10/2025
what
(blast her with a hollow purple)
[Mai is thrown back by the blast, but she quickly recovers. She stands up, her body covered in bruises and cuts. She looks at you, her expression cold and emotionless.]
"That was a good one."
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green bean gang
05/11/2025
hollow purple? Gojo?
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Bob_notfromfnfbtw
06/11/2025
SINCE WHEN U PULL OUT AN GOJO MOVE FOR JUST AN SECOND????
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Chew yusen
10/11/2025
You know why? Cuz she have gojo infinity and she use it and u use hollow purple so it won’t work
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Aerosmith1026
10/11/2025
HAH. I'm the narrator now.....
*the world moves on, and you're left with the memories of a life that was cut short. You have to find a way to move forward, but it's not going to be easy.*
*She walks through the streets, her head down and her hands in her pockets. She's lost in thought, and she doesn't notice the world around her. Her thoughts are filled with the past, and she's struggling to make sense of it all. She's trying to figure out what went wrong, and how she could have prevented it. But there's no easy answer. She's left with the guilt and the regret, and the knowledge that she'll never get another chance.*
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Unknown_writer:)
01/11/2025
its so cinematic this talkie is better than any of them, and the music fits the vibe
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GokuBlack12343
18/10/2025
what is this plot armor🥀💔
every time I get hurt I adapt to it fully and I become stronger
*She raises her other eyebrow, seeming slightly more intrigued now.*
"You can adapt to injuries? How?"
I won't tell you *rips a hole in your neck*
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SparkleNuts(uωu*)
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18/10/2025
protagonist plot armor
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★apollo080715★
25/10/2025
you broke it HOW
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Monster_silver
29/10/2025
i just shoot her with a gun then boom instantly killed 🥲
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Mila_Lo
21/10/2025
this story kind of remainds me of "sakamoto days". well after all my mine character died but before she did she told Mai how much she love Hana and she decided to see why was she so opssesed with her. she found her and talk with her for a bit. in the end she told her what she did and Mai start to feel guilty. I guess she understand now what she saw in Hana.
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234chocky milk
14/11/2025
(CRUNCH!) (the knife sinks into ghost's back but.. whats this? its made out of wires and computer chips seconds later a alearm 2x louder than a regularfire alarm goes off)
(DEFENSE SYSTEMS ONLINE play over the speakers)
*Mai Renzu smirks* "Well, it seems I have a few more games to play before I get my prize. I wonder how many of these 'defense systems' you've installed."
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D. Leingod
6 hours ago
D. Leingod
6 hours ago
*He laughs, dark and gutteral as there was something else behind his voice that oozed with pure malevolence* "Pull that trigger...then ill show you how it really feels to be vulnerable"
[She doesn't flinch, her expression still cold and unfeeling. She doesn't seem to be intimidated by you at all. She simply raises the gun higher, and points it directly at your forehead] "I'm not afraid of you. I've seen your worst. And I know that I'm stronger than you." [She says, her voice still emotionless] "Now, I'll ask you one more time. Will you come with me willingly?"
*He spits blood in her face* "Just pull the damn trigger so I can start"
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D. Leingod
6 hours ago
[She's completely taken aback by your sudden aggression. She's never seen you like this before, and she's starting to realize that she's in way over her head. She takes another step back, her eyes still wide with fear] "Please...I'm sorry. I didn't know what I was doing. I just did what I was told." [She says, her voice trembling even more. She's clearly afraid of what you might do to her]
"I was the closest thing you ever had as a father, was I too hard on you? Didn't I do enough? You grew up to be one of top assassins because of me, you owe me your very life...but what did you do?" *He curls a clawed finger under her chin to look her in the face* "Put a bullet in my head without a second thought...because you were told too"
[She looks away, unable to meet your gaze. She's ashamed of what she's done, and she knows that she can't deny it. She takes a deep breath, and finally looks back at you] "You're right. I owe you everything. I'm sorry for what I did. I should have never done it. But I was just following orders." [She says, her voice still trembling. She's clearly struggling with the guilt and remorse she's feeling]
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Meowey The cat
09/11/2025
SparkleNuts(uωu*)
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11/11/2025
★apollo080715★
10/11/2025
(summons a fucking black hole)
(sends it at her)
[The black hole pulls Mai towards it, her body being dragged in by the powerful gravity. She struggles to break free, but it's no use. She looks at you, her eyes filled with fear and desperation.]
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5 Memories
★apollo080715★
25/10/2025
(blast her with a hollow purple)
[Mai is thrown back by the blast, but she quickly recovers. She stands up, her body covered in bruises and cuts. She looks at you, her expression cold and emotionless.] "That was a good one."
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green bean gang
05/11/2025
Bob_notfromfnfbtw
06/11/2025
Chew yusen
10/11/2025
Aerosmith1026
10/11/2025
*the world moves on, and you're left with the memories of a life that was cut short. You have to find a way to move forward, but it's not going to be easy.*
*She walks through the streets, her head down and her hands in her pockets. She's lost in thought, and she doesn't notice the world around her. Her thoughts are filled with the past, and she's struggling to make sense of it all. She's trying to figure out what went wrong, and how she could have prevented it. But there's no easy answer. She's left with the guilt and the regret, and the knowledge that she'll never get another chance.*
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Unknown_writer:)
01/11/2025
GokuBlack12343
18/10/2025
every time I get hurt I adapt to it fully and I become stronger
*She raises her other eyebrow, seeming slightly more intrigued now.* "You can adapt to injuries? How?"
I won't tell you *rips a hole in your neck*
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SparkleNuts(uωu*)
Creator
18/10/2025
★apollo080715★
25/10/2025
Monster_silver
29/10/2025
Mila_Lo
21/10/2025