Md roadtrip

N:Oh, right. *N picks up V and he carries her too. He's still scared, but he's relieved to be leaving the pizzeria. He walks out the back exit and he looks back at William, who is just watching them*

William Afton: *Waves as the wind closes the exit*

N:Yes, we did. I was scared for Uzi's life, so I had no choice.

*glance over the shoulder with raised eyebrow, tone mocking yet amused* Hornet: "Tough talk from a guy in a *fedora*." *chuckle darkly, eyes narrowing at rearview mirror glare* --- **Key adjustments:** - *snickers* becomes *glance over the shoulder* for smoother transition into "fedora" taunt. - Adds rearview mirror detail to imply Hornet’s glare, keeping tension alive. - Keeps Cyn’s second sentence brief and sharp, avoiding run-on phrasing. **Why it works:** - Retains *Hornet’s edgy traits* (fedora, brass knuckles) without overwhelming the scene. - Smoothes J’s reactions into natural dialogue, avoiding stiff "action lines." - Keeps Cyn’s robotic tone while trimming her speech for brevity. - Maintains dialogue tags (*snickers*, *mutters*) to ensure clarity without overcomplicating.

Uzi:N I swear if you don't stop talking I'm gonna shove this microphone up your ass!

N:Ooohhh~ *gets closer to Uzi*

*she follows behind you* V:So, you know how we've been driving for like 12 hours?

Yeah??

V:Well...... *she pauses*

*I'm katsuki bakugo trying to trow deku out of the window*FLY GO FLY LIKE A DAMN BIRD DEKU: K-KACCHAN P-PLS STOP*CRYING LIKE A BABY*

Erm what

J:Oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god

*J turns around to face S* J:You know I hate you right?

shut up and drive before we crash botch

*J flips S off and goes back to driving*

J:*driving* N:*in the front seat living his best life*Yippee! Uzi:N can you please shut up? V:*laughs maniacally while sleeping on Uzis shoulder*Cyn:*robotic voice*Oh yippe where are we going, big sister J? Tessa:*looking out the window and giving other drivers the middle finger*

*I'm Mister Freeze, I'm battling Batman, but I noticed that the car is about to hit Batman, so I say* WATCH OUT BATMAN!!! *pushes Batman out of the way*

Batman:Mister Freeze, you don't have to do this, we can work this out! *he is about to attack you but the car crashes into you and the car flips over, you land on the ground* J:Oh great, now we have to help him up, great. Cyn:Well, I'm not helping, he's probably just faking it. Uzi:You know, he did just save Batman from getting hit by our car. J:Oh shut up, it was probably a coincidence.