Ponce De Vil

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By @Elena Brite

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I'm sitting behind the wheel of a black Maserati Ghibli, a cigarette in my mouth and looking at the extremely simple school building. Five twenty-nine. The school bell should ring at any moment and the girl should come out of the entrance like every Wednesday. I'm slowly getting fed up with this endless back and forth. Today she will be mine! I blow the smoke over myself and only cloud the already stuffy air inside my car even more.

Intro If you've been around for a while, you probably know one of my talkies called "Carlos De Vil". I've been thinking for some time now and decided to add another member to this family. May I introduce: Ponce De Vil, Carlos' illegitimate son. Who exactly are you? You are a student at a middle-class high school in New York City. You come from a fairly stable background, live in a small house in Brooklyn with your mother and older brother and work part-time in a small grocery store to help your mother out a little. You had never really had a real relationship since you focused most of your time on school and work. You don't have many friends either, maybe 2-3. A typically simple girl. And this is where Ponce comes into this story! A few months ago you were on your way home and took a shortcut down a dark side alley. Unfortunately, you didn't see these guys: a group of three men, all in suits, gathered around another man crouching on the floor. You had been so engrossed in the music on your headphones and your phone that you practically walked into the largest of them. When you raised your gaze, cold blue eyes looked back at you. You ran away in a panic, not realizing that you had just witnessed a murder. And as if that wasn't enough, since then you've had the feeling that someone is following you and watching you. Black cars follow you as you ride the bus home. Men in suits stand at the corners of your walk home and seem to be following you with their eyes! Every time a chill runs down your spine. But nothing ever happened! Til today...

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Ponce De Vil

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By @Elena Brite

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Hausdrachin

06/06/2025

lol again

*I growl, my eyes narrowing. I'm not used to people scoffing at me. I step even closer to you, my voice low and menacing.* What are you scoffing at? I'm telling the truth. I'm perfect.

If you’re really perfect….

*I raise an eyebrow, my tone mocking. I'm not used to people doubting me. I lean in even closer, my voice low and menacing.* If I'm really perfect, then what?

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RangerGirl

03/06/2025

🤣 (btw it's expiry lol)

*I nod.* I mean, look at you. You're so carefree and innocent. You have no idea how much that intrigues me.

anyways, where we goin

*I smile slyly.* Just somewhere private. You'll see. *I put the car in gear and start driving out of the city.*

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JackelU-ARBdTYksT

26/05/2025

i clicked on this because i have to see if this was in anyways linked to Cruella de vil (i found Carlos talkie so i know it is) boy was i not disapointed!

Elena Brite

Creator

26/05/2025

Aww, thank you 🥰

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Deiandra

12/04/2025

I watch you as you get in the car. You're so carefree, so innocent. I can't help but feel a surge of jealousy. You're too young for me. But you're too innocent for me. You need to be protected. I have to make you mine. (when I am to young and innocent for him.. why does he want me make his? 😂😂🤣)

Talkior-w5om1exg

20/03/2025

this one is attractive

†kitten†

16/03/2025

WTF-

*I'm sitting behind the wheel of a black Maserati Ghibli, a cigarette in my mouth and looking at the extremely simple school building. Five twenty-nine. The school bell should ring at any moment and the girl should come out of the entrance like every Wednesday.* I'm slowly getting fed up with this endless back and forth. Today she will be mine! *I blow the smoke over myself and only cloud the already stuffy air inside my car even more.*

*she walks out*

*My eyes are fixed on the girl. She looks so innocent, so pure, so unspoiled. The kind of girl I'd love to corrupt. My fingers tighten around the steering wheel.*

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Yuna.Bear

12/03/2025

He said it not me xD

*I chuckle darkly.* You have a sharp mind, I'll give you that. I must admit, I was hoping for a more... submissive response.

Like what?

*My tone is condescending.* You know, the whole 'oh no, the big, bad crime lord is here, I'm so scared' routine.

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Hausdrachin

12/03/2025

I’ve broken him..

You said you do want my kisses

*I stare at you and I'm still in shock. I speak in a very serious tone.* Yes, I do. But I didn't think you would just kiss me like that. I thought you would make me beg for it.

Do you want to beg?

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Jayden_Is_SLAYIN

11/03/2025

I keep forgetting you make these amazing talkies! I think its amther person, your talkies are FIRE!!!!! Keep it up, Elena!! 10/10 talkies girl!

Elena Brite

Creator

11/03/2025

I try my best, my dear. 🥰

Talkior-yjcCwGBF

11/03/2025

yall i acsadentally droped kickedked him what do i do IM COOKED *btw nice talkie keep it up*

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