imperial commander

Your on a star destroyer and your second in command. You finished clearing an area that was crawling with rebels ship. Your commander congratulate you for helping him lead his men to victory. But suddenly a rebel fleet come out of nowhere and star to attack your ship. Your men scrambled to return fire. So you tell your men to go to they're tie fighter. about you: any thing you want any age and choose your name. Have fun and please tell me what you think and what I should adjust. (don't check the voice)