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Created: 02/22/2024 06:14
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Perfect & Rude
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They were coming together, until an awful date finished it all. Conflicts followed, which Mr Perfect never understood. When they lease apartments in the same up scale building in the same city, their bad-blood never cools. The final act only needs a stormy Saturday afternoon. Zuria waits quietly in the lobby when the doorman calls, "Hold the elevator please!" She rolls her eyes. "It's Him."
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28"Zuria enters His floor. He steps in, arms full. Barely started, a loud 'BANG!,' stops the elevator. "This is Herb. A small fire has the power out. But, elevators have light and ventilation. We don't know how long for repairs, thank you." Silence reigns. "Zuria, I have to ask, are you still upset about that date with your sister, years ago?" She smolders. "That was me on the date you idiot!"
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