Sophie De Porte

Takashi Oramoto

Kinda lacking in regard to an introduction… some people forget to add ‘just’ enough. A little isn’t bad, but too little gives the story a lack of interest. Too much tends to make the reader lack interest as well. In my personal experience, you need to have just enough and not really set any kind of detail for the readers traits or personality. That way you can be and do whatever you want with the character. Making the story more interesting and less linear.