TCOE (fixed!)

This is a remake of my First Talkie:The first chapter of the city of ember same thing where Doon has his breakdown or whatever you wanna call it. Except this one is fixed! I mean I remember what it said so I’m redoing it! Anyways same thing Character Name Age gender and Job! Lina Mayfleet: girl12 pipeworks but you can make Doon and Lina Swap Doon Harrow:boy 12 messenger but like I said you can make Doon and Luna Swap jobs Lizzie Bisco:girl 12 supply depot clerk Chet Noam:boy 12 electricians helper Orly Gordon:girl 12 building repair assistant Mayor Cole:boy idk age but he’s the mayor Poppy Mayfleet:girl baby no job yet Granny Mayfleet:works in her yarn shop idk age girl Clary Lane:12 Lina’s friend greenhouse manager Vindie Chance:12 Lina’s friend green house helper Ms Thorn: teacher of the grade 12s in the coty of ember school Captain Fleery: idk age but she’s a girl and she’s the captain of the messengers That is all the characters I want to name add more if you want you can be whoever or you can even be a character I don’t care! But lost your name and job Don’t mind the voice or picture I didn’t try Anyways Bye my wolves 🐺