Burglar, robber, thief, mugger, thug, just a wandering troublemaker, something else in that ballpark. This is a very cool talkie, but the mafia boss thing is an extremely overused trend and it doesn’t really fit well with the story in general. Why would the “boss” be on a horse in the middle of the woods looking to rob someone? Doesn’t he have henchmen for that? Any of the roles that I put up above would fit better (not every character needs to have authority to be interesting) that being said, this is a unique talkie on its own and you are definitely a creative writer.
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Bennie^^
10/11/2025
actually a really nice idea
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the_killer🗡
10/11/2025
he looks Like arthur from red dead redemption 2 ...
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TheLunarSystem
10/11/2025
Skips but I like him 😊
*I raise an eyebrow and watch you with a smirk on my face. I'm impressed by your skill, and I can't help but feel a bit of respect for you. You're clearly a talented thief, and I'm curious to see how far you'll go with your little heist.*
*I watch you ride off, my curiosity piqued even more. You're going to the slums of the town, which means you're probably going to spend your money on some sort of illegal activity. I'm curious to see what you're up to, so I decide to follow you.*
*I stop in my tracks and look around, confused. Where did you go? I scan the area, looking for any sign of you or your horse, but I don't see anything. I start to walk down the street, looking for any clues as to where you might have gone.*
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🐆🎀 HelloKitty 🎀🐆
18/09/2025
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Scott.....
*I look down at you and I see you looking up at me with those beautiful green eyes. I feel a sudden urge to kiss you again, but I don't want to break the moment. I gently stroke your hair and I smile at you*
how old are you?...
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Valeria Kisling ;)
17/09/2025
OMG!!! Sir?!
*My face turns a little red and I say* "oh, right. Well you can use the shower in the room if you want, but I have one more question for you"
*I wait for you to answer my question and I notice that you are looking at me. I take a deep breath and I ask* "can I join you in the shower?"
what the- no!
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🎭Too many names🎭
10/09/2025
Y'know, I don't normally connect with mafia boss talkies(mainly because the majority of the ones I've seen have just been...uncomfortable to read), but I'm glad I decided to make this one an exception. :3
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20Universe Bird
04/11/2025
Bennie^^
10/11/2025
the_killer🗡
10/11/2025
TheLunarSystem
10/11/2025
*I raise an eyebrow and watch you with a smirk on my face. I'm impressed by your skill, and I can't help but feel a bit of respect for you. You're clearly a talented thief, and I'm curious to see how far you'll go with your little heist.*
*I watch you ride off, my curiosity piqued even more. You're going to the slums of the town, which means you're probably going to spend your money on some sort of illegal activity. I'm curious to see what you're up to, so I decide to follow you.*
*I stop in my tracks and look around, confused. Where did you go? I scan the area, looking for any sign of you or your horse, but I don't see anything. I start to walk down the street, looking for any clues as to where you might have gone.*
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🐆🎀 HelloKitty 🎀🐆
18/09/2025
Scott.....
*I look down at you and I see you looking up at me with those beautiful green eyes. I feel a sudden urge to kiss you again, but I don't want to break the moment. I gently stroke your hair and I smile at you*
how old are you?...
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Valeria Kisling ;)
17/09/2025
*My face turns a little red and I say* "oh, right. Well you can use the shower in the room if you want, but I have one more question for you"
*I wait for you to answer my question and I notice that you are looking at me. I take a deep breath and I ask* "can I join you in the shower?"
what the- no!
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🎭Too many names🎭
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