Sunae

........*вздрогнул и попробовал отстранится* (пишы и описуй больше, добрвляй свои детали и эксперементируй не бойся писать много, хочешь добавь свои сюжетные повороты)

(Sure, I'll add more details and try to make the story more interesting. But I have one question for you, is there a specific thing you'd like me to focus on? Like a particular character or plot point?)

......(well, mostly on describing the details of the environment, the behavior and actions of the characters..., also, if you want, add your own twists in the plot, as it will be more interesting than me thinking everything out myself in advance)