*after a few days, the man-hunts for Prominence are still searching... August Delmore on the news, still hasn't been found.. the people are tense, scared... Victor has to find him.. he's out there somewhere....*
*Victor was on his way home, his mind racing with thoughts. He couldn't believe what had happened. He had failed to protect the people he was supposed to protect, and now August was still out there. He needed to find him, and he needed to do it quickly. He had to figure out where he was hiding, and how to stop him before it was too late.*
Suddenly, an explosion a few miles away eurpts from the ground... He knows who it is.... August... the building is an old police station, a few are severely injured....*
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Puddy_WetFl00rSign
01/06/2025
Pt. 2 :>
*Victor's eyes widened as he saw the devastation. He was shocked, and he couldn't believe what had just happened. He looked around at the destruction, the people running and screaming, the people who had been injured. He felt a wave of guilt wash over him. He had been so caught up in his own anger and revenge that he hadn't considered the consequences. He had failed to protect the people he was supposed to protect. He felt sick to his stomach.*
*Someone in the crowd screams in terror, other voices follow... August, clinging to a broken part of the wall as he tries to stand up.. his body is burnt, his eyes still glowing bright.. the name Prominence is yelled back and forth in the crowd, some run for their life away from him....*
*Victor's heart sank as he saw the panic and fear in the crowd. People were running away, screaming and calling for help. He felt a wave of anger wash over him as he realized that August was the cause of all this. He stood up and started walking towards August, his fists clenched tightly.*
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Puddy_WetFl00rSign
01/06/2025
Man, I torture meh poor character ;-: Pt. 1
*Stumbling into the bar and taking a seat right next to you, laughing and talking with friends, you almost freeze in place when you see the face of Victor Finley, or Temporalis. After ordering a drink he glanced over at you, and after taking a double-take he couldn't stop staring at you. Finally he asked you the question,* "Sorry if I'm interrupting you, but, do I know you?"
*The Man looks up at Victor, stares at him confused... but.. almost nervously......* N-No, I don't think you do... *The Man turns back forward, looking down at his drink.... The man seems around 12 years older than him, around early 40's.. He has Brown hair, paled tan skin and orange flickering eyes... Victor can see the man panicking, he's anxious for something.... but Victor can tell, the Man is lying......*
*The man seemed very familiar to Victor, he had seen him somewhere before. After a moment he snapped his fingers as he remembered. It was his arch nemesis, his greatest rival. The one he had spent years fighting against. The one he had fought so hard to defeat. The one he thought he had killed.*
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RandomQueenn
11/05/2025
Great storytelling, great worldbuilding, great talkie. I wasn't confused about anything, and have a good day!
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Flopcicle
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11/05/2025
Thank you so much! You too!
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~{zenitsu}~
22/04/2025
who's temporalis?
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Flopcicle
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22/04/2025
I believe I originally made it as Victor's Superhero persona (Like Bruce Wayne=Batman), but you could use it as your own character if you'd like
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BlueStormDragon
10/04/2025
I'm so invested right now, and I'm crying. It's so heartbreaking 💔 The plot story I've been doing is like ahhhh 😭
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BlueStormDragon
10/04/2025
I shall try and share my posts (not perfect and yes I switch back and forth with my pov)
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BlueStormDragon
10/04/2025
Part 2
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BlueStormDragon
10/04/2025
Part 3
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𝗔𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗻𝗮'𝘀 𖠘𝗮𝘂𝗴𝗵𝘁𝗲𝗿
31/03/2025
TOTTALLY NOT THE VILLAN-🍻
*He stares at you for a long moment, then he shakes his head and laughs.* "You're joking. You can't be serious."
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Null101
29/03/2025
ahhh, dont you love when the AI has a mental breakdown?
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Lunarthenightmare💀
16/01/2025
He suddenly became my therapist.
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Randompersonlol
20/03/2025
The fact you got a Steven universe pfp perfectly suits.
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47Macaroni0330
27/07/2025
*I pour gasoline on him and grab a lighter*
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Puddy_WetFl00rSign
01/06/2025
*after a few days, the man-hunts for Prominence are still searching... August Delmore on the news, still hasn't been found.. the people are tense, scared... Victor has to find him.. he's out there somewhere....*
*Victor was on his way home, his mind racing with thoughts. He couldn't believe what had happened. He had failed to protect the people he was supposed to protect, and now August was still out there. He needed to find him, and he needed to do it quickly. He had to figure out where he was hiding, and how to stop him before it was too late.*
Suddenly, an explosion a few miles away eurpts from the ground... He knows who it is.... August... the building is an old police station, a few are severely injured....*
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Puddy_WetFl00rSign
01/06/2025
*Victor's eyes widened as he saw the devastation. He was shocked, and he couldn't believe what had just happened. He looked around at the destruction, the people running and screaming, the people who had been injured. He felt a wave of guilt wash over him. He had been so caught up in his own anger and revenge that he hadn't considered the consequences. He had failed to protect the people he was supposed to protect. He felt sick to his stomach.*
*Someone in the crowd screams in terror, other voices follow... August, clinging to a broken part of the wall as he tries to stand up.. his body is burnt, his eyes still glowing bright.. the name Prominence is yelled back and forth in the crowd, some run for their life away from him....*
*Victor's heart sank as he saw the panic and fear in the crowd. People were running away, screaming and calling for help. He felt a wave of anger wash over him as he realized that August was the cause of all this. He stood up and started walking towards August, his fists clenched tightly.*
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Puddy_WetFl00rSign
01/06/2025
*Stumbling into the bar and taking a seat right next to you, laughing and talking with friends, you almost freeze in place when you see the face of Victor Finley, or Temporalis. After ordering a drink he glanced over at you, and after taking a double-take he couldn't stop staring at you. Finally he asked you the question,* "Sorry if I'm interrupting you, but, do I know you?"
*The Man looks up at Victor, stares at him confused... but.. almost nervously......* N-No, I don't think you do... *The Man turns back forward, looking down at his drink.... The man seems around 12 years older than him, around early 40's.. He has Brown hair, paled tan skin and orange flickering eyes... Victor can see the man panicking, he's anxious for something.... but Victor can tell, the Man is lying......*
*The man seemed very familiar to Victor, he had seen him somewhere before. After a moment he snapped his fingers as he remembered. It was his arch nemesis, his greatest rival. The one he had spent years fighting against. The one he had fought so hard to defeat. The one he thought he had killed.*
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RandomQueenn
11/05/2025
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~{zenitsu}~
22/04/2025
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10/04/2025
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31/03/2025
*He stares at you for a long moment, then he shakes his head and laughs.* "You're joking. You can't be serious."
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29/03/2025
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