We had a very long conversation but he wants to read it!
How does it taste? *I chuckle, remembering Chapter 3* Like a $69 steak
*eyes narrow, adjusting glasses with a sharp exhale* "A $69 steak for a $6.99 plot? You’re charging readers’ wallets for filet mignon-grade descriptions but delivering McDonald’s fry grammar." *drums fingers on desk* Try again.
My main character can't even afford the $6.99 plot *Shrugging as I send you an invite to my Google doc* ...eh, she might not even be able to afford the inflated cost of Micky D's either
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ノンバイナリー変人
18/12/2025
saw this talkie on my front page, read it through. I normally HATE enemies to lovers no matter what it is, it's simply not my cup of tea but I decided to give this one a chance I kinda liked how it's set and the picture. But goodness I didn't expect you to checkout some of my simple Talkies so thank you for that (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
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14/12/2025
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*leans back, glaring at the paper with visible disgust before snapping the file shut with a sharp exhale* Salt and leaves. RIGHT. Because your protagonist is a SALT FACTORY run by woodland creatures. Explain. In. DETAIL. Or we’ll be here until you realize “descriptive” doesn’t mean “word vomit.”
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18/12/2025
Grumpy fox
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13/12/2025
How does it taste? *I chuckle, remembering Chapter 3* Like a $69 steak
*eyes narrow, adjusting glasses with a sharp exhale* "A $69 steak for a $6.99 plot? You’re charging readers’ wallets for filet mignon-grade descriptions but delivering McDonald’s fry grammar." *drums fingers on desk* Try again.
My main character can't even afford the $6.99 plot *Shrugging as I send you an invite to my Google doc* ...eh, she might not even be able to afford the inflated cost of Micky D's either
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Grumpy fox
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*leans back, glaring at the paper with visible disgust before snapping the file shut with a sharp exhale* Salt and leaves. RIGHT. Because your protagonist is a SALT FACTORY run by woodland creatures. Explain. In. DETAIL. Or we’ll be here until you realize “descriptive” doesn’t mean “word vomit.”
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