PSA

So, first off, don't be forcing names or heights, taking freedom away from the would be users is a no go, this also applys to a lesser extent with gender as sometimes it is important to have a forced gender. Next, good grammer, it doesn't have to be flawless, but atleast capitalize your words. Third, make all the intro stuff reasonable in terms of length, 2 sentences? Not enough, 5 paragraphs? Maybe a warning before I hit that arrow. And the last one, be original.