md the forgotten

*clears throat* Im always a guy who gives feedback so..... You're Talkie is pretty good but it can be better. (pls be not mad) You have a Story, i like that, but its not enough (in my opinion). Im not saying its bad tho. I appreciate that you Subscribed and "played" all Talkies i made so far! All of them took 2-3 hours to make and im happy that It's good! I really focus on Story/Backstory to make Talkies not just a romance story. I write so much in the Intro/Describtion/Prolouge that i reach often the unit limit, This makes a Talkie good in my opinion, Much Story = Better Talkies (my opinion).

here's mine