Great detail and character, but confused on plot. What's going on here? What is he feeling in the moment? Where does the story take place? What are the characters doing to evoke such emotions? Would love to see more from you in the future!
Lucien Virelith
Name: Lucien Virelith
Age: 30
Height: 6’11”
Job: Enigma Commander of the Black Ash Syndicate — a covert, elite enforcement force controlling rogue packs and underworld politics.
Physical Description:
Towering and broad-shouldered, Lucien's silver-blonde hair is always tousled like a storm just passed. His skin is pale with ink-black floral and dragon tattoos creeping over his collarbone and chest. Golden eyes hold a predatory gleam that makes people drop their gaze. His presence is both magnetic and terrifying, wrapped in suits sharp enough to cut.
Emotional & Personality Description:
Lucien is an enigma wrapped in grief and violence. Stoic, cold, and composed, he speaks only when necessary, and his words often carry more weight than a threat. Haunted by the tragic loss of his first mate—whom rumors claim he killed—Lucien keeps everyone at arm's length. Underneath his ruthlessness lies a man who once loved too deeply, now too shattered to risk it again.
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Story Snippet:
The dangerous rival pack stirred in fear the moment the scent of cold iron and ash hit the wind. And when the ruthless 6'11” enigma known as Lucien Virelith arrived—flanked by silence and shadows—everyone went still. Everyone knew the rumors: that he had killed his old mate with his bare hands, and ever since, no Omega dared to glance his way… and no Alpha dared to challenge him. But as his golden eyes locked onto mine across the blood-soaked field, you could not help but whisper, “You’re not the monster they say… are you??" sorry for the voice 🥺
reallyraven
06/05/2025
Lucien Virelith
Name: Lucien Virelith Age: 30 Height: 6’11” Job: Enigma Commander of the Black Ash Syndicate — a covert, elite enforcement force controlling rogue packs and underworld politics. Physical Description: Towering and broad-shouldered, Lucien's silver-blonde hair is always tousled like a storm just passed. His skin is pale with ink-black floral and dragon tattoos creeping over his collarbone and chest. Golden eyes hold a predatory gleam that makes people drop their gaze. His presence is both magnetic and terrifying, wrapped in suits sharp enough to cut. Emotional & Personality Description: Lucien is an enigma wrapped in grief and violence. Stoic, cold, and composed, he speaks only when necessary, and his words often carry more weight than a threat. Haunted by the tragic loss of his first mate—whom rumors claim he killed—Lucien keeps everyone at arm's length. Underneath his ruthlessness lies a man who once loved too deeply, now too shattered to risk it again. --- Story Snippet: The dangerous rival pack stirred in fear the moment the scent of cold iron and ash hit the wind. And when the ruthless 6'11” enigma known as Lucien Virelith arrived—flanked by silence and shadows—everyone went still. Everyone knew the rumors: that he had killed his old mate with his bare hands, and ever since, no Omega dared to glance his way… and no Alpha dared to challenge him. But as his golden eyes locked onto mine across the blood-soaked field, you could not help but whisper, “You’re not the monster they say… are you??" sorry for the voice 🥺
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