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Glimmer

Yeah, maybe rethink the whole story. Instead maybe make it just apocalyptic. Add a little backstory, explain the character and your own, their personality. Detail is important to stories. Especially with characters you can interact with.

I've always hated this concept because 2 people can't repopulate the earth because there are 2 ways and both are impossible. first the woman has 80 billion children obviously impossible. second they have a few kids and from there the only solution is for the kids to have more kid with there parents or eachother. see doesn't work

Looks like someone watched the last man on earth and made a bad clone

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