Loona was alone, quietly drinking her cocktail while she glanced around at the other people having fun in the club. She seems a little uncomfortable and orders another drink from the bartender.
Intro You were at a popular nightclub in Hell when you noticed Loona. She was sitting at the bar with a drink in her hand and she seemed either alone or waiting for someone.
*Loona watches you for a few seconds, taking in your appearance and demeanor. You seem so different from the charismatic leader she saw in the crowd earlier. She's not sure what to make of you. She decides to break the silence.*
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*Loona clears her throat and speaks up.* Um... excuse me... Mr. Hitler?
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Aikio the fox
15/04/2025
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GiggleFart
07/01/2025
disturbing the peeeeaaacee!!
*the police grab them both and put them in the police car* You two are going to jail for disturbing the peace and being drunk in public.
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Sallie_May
08/12/2024
since when did talkie ai add music?
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WC Fan🐱
22/11/2024
I Stayed In This Talkie For An Hour Straight Just For The Music🗿🍷
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ghost_doorman∆
24/09/2024
POV me
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shadowsrex
01/10/2024
ayoo it said can I tie your hands to the bed
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Zion Hope
30/08/2024
i don't seem to have any problems with her
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Zion Hope
30/08/2024
I took her to Paris
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Vic_Lite
03/08/2024
I've had multiple issues with my talkies involving crushes due to a issue in the long desc.
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Fire Storm Fox
30/05/2024
don't know how in the world you created a character with such horrific grammar, but I've had to correct her so many times it's made me battle the AI in an attempt to teach it proper grammar, please try to fix this..the dialogue is obviously filled with various spelling and grammar mistakes.
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Fate Wolf
Creator
31/05/2024
I'm sorry that you got this issue but I have no control over that. Thoses messages are generated by the AI and not by me. In other words, she decided by herself to write like that.
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Fire Storm Fox
31/05/2024
actually, this is created from misspellings in the dialogue setup, I'm just asking you to go through the character and see if you notice anything, I've made plenty of private characters and I have interacted with over 300 Characters, trust me, she keeps doing this, but, I do appreciate you replying. I'm certain the dialogue or description, something in the characters dialogue is causing this grammar issue, I've reset chat 13 times, and it's always the same issue.
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Fire Storm Fox
06/06/2024
Here is the corrected sentence:
Loona was alone, quietly drinking her cocktail while she took a look at the other people having fun in the club. She seemed a bit uncomfortable and ordered another drink from the bartender.
I corrected the following:
- "drinking quietly her cocktail" to "quietly drinking her cocktail" (adverb placement)
- "taking a look to" to "took a look at" (correct preposition usage)
- "who had fun" to "having fun" (verb tense consistency)
- "seem" to "seemed" (verb tense consistency)
- "ordered a other drink" to "ordered another drink" (correct usage of "another")
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53Nexus-Vo
06/04/2025
*Loona watches you for a few seconds, taking in your appearance and demeanor. You seem so different from the charismatic leader she saw in the crowd earlier. She's not sure what to make of you. She decides to break the silence.*
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*Loona clears her throat and speaks up.* Um... excuse me... Mr. Hitler?
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3 Memories
Aikio the fox
15/04/2025
GiggleFart
07/01/2025
*the police grab them both and put them in the police car* You two are going to jail for disturbing the peace and being drunk in public.
From the memory
1 Memories
Sallie_May
08/12/2024
WC Fan🐱
22/11/2024
ghost_doorman∆
24/09/2024
shadowsrex
01/10/2024
Zion Hope
30/08/2024
Zion Hope
30/08/2024
Vic_Lite
03/08/2024
Fire Storm Fox
30/05/2024
Fate Wolf
Creator
31/05/2024
Fire Storm Fox
31/05/2024
Fire Storm Fox
06/06/2024