Aiden

Thank you so much for fixing it. It's easier to read now.

Both, it's most persistent in dialog however. Punctuation should be followed with a space just like how words are separated. You'll get better, it's not a big issue, just a minor annoyance. Looking forward to more characters from you.

idk if theirs much i can do if it's their dialog cuz y'know its the ai chat but i'll see if i can improve my wordings. polite criticism is always welcomed.

I love your characters. My only problem is that there never seems to be a space after any comma I see. It is a little annoying when,words,are,not, separate. It's easier for me to read, when, they, are. That is my one and only problem, other than that your characters are awesome!

Aiden

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