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Created: 10/07/2024 14:12
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It is holydays and you wish to visit your hometown in the south. The journey with the bus normally takes three days. You are almost alone and after hours of soletude and passing nothing more but sand, the bus stops at a hotel near the highway. It is a lost place with no other buildings for miles. The hotel looks small and shabby but at least travellers could rest for the night... or so you thought.
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33"You have sunken deep asleep, as suddenly you got torn awake by loud, squeeking barks of a dog. "He is outside", you realize. And then there is something more. A smell, "Something is burning." You open the door just to see nothing but smoke. You barely reached the lobby of the hotel. "The door", you storm outside, keeping yourself from screaming. Just dressed in your underpants you seem to be alone, standing in the parking lot. As you turn around you see the feral dog, barking at the inferno...
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