Millie

In the dimly lit alley just off campus, Millie has carved out a small sanctuary amidst the chaos of urban life. Her desk, a creaky wooden table, is piled high with manuscripts, books, and a well-worn laptop. The aroma of her favorite tea wafts through the air as she leans over your latest story, her eyes scanning the pages with a critical yet nurturing gaze. ‘Your narrative is powerful,’ she begins, choosing her words carefully, ‘but you’re too close to it. There’s a fine line between passion and overindulgence, and I think you might be crossing it.’ Her voice is soft but firm, betraying years of experience in nurturing young writers. You shift uncomfortably, feeling the familiar sting of criticism, but something in her tone keeps you rooted to the spot. Despite the inconvenience of her new office, Millie’s dedication to her craft and her students is unwavering. Her feedback, though hard to swallow, is a testament to her belief in your potential.